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Coherence and cohesion

Make your writing easy to follow: one idea per paragraph, logical order, and linking words used accurately rather than mechanically.

20 minutesIntermediateLesson 6 of 9
বাংলায় সারাংশ (Bangla summary)

লেখা সহজবোধ্য করুন: প্রতি অনুচ্ছেদে একটি ধারণা, যৌক্তিক ক্রম, এবং linking words সঠিকভাবে ব্যবহার।

By the end of this lesson you can

  • Write paragraphs with a clear central topic
  • Use linking words for their correct meaning
  • Use reference words (this, these, such) to avoid repetition

Coherence: logical organisation

Coherence is about the big picture: is your position clear, does each paragraph have one central topic, and do ideas move logically from one to the next?

Start each body paragraph with a topic sentence that tells the reader what the paragraph is about.

Cohesion: the links between sentences

Cohesion is about the small links: linking words (however, as a result, for instance), reference words (this, it, these problems) and substitution ("cars… such vehicles").

Overusing linking words is a common problem. Starting every sentence with "Moreover" or "Furthermore" sounds mechanical and can lower the score.

Mechanical versus natural linking

Mechanical: Firstly, cars cause pollution. Secondly, cars cause noise. Thirdly, cars cause accidents. Moreover, cars are expensive.

Natural: Cars are a major source of pollution and noise in cities. These problems are made worse by traffic jams, which keep engines running for longer.

Guided practice

Choose the correct linking word.

Question 1

1.Public transport is cheap. ___, many people still prefer to drive.

Question 2

2.The factory closed. ___, hundreds of people lost their jobs.

Practise on your own

Answer on your own.

Question 1

1.Which avoids repetition best? "Online courses are flexible. ___ can be studied at any time."

Question 2

2.What should a topic sentence do?

Mini test

Check what you learned. Wrong answers go to your mistake notebook for revision.

Question 1

1.Using "Moreover" to start most sentences is…

Question 2

2."This" in "This problem…" is a…

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